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Tuesday, September 14, 2010

my story

Ok so I have been taking a bit of time here and there working on my story. I think I mentioned it a while back.

Here is the rundown of the story

Well the main character is really rather strong. She had a normal childhood until her mom went crazy (this is NOTHING like my mom) and took all her childhood toys away from her. She loved her bunnies a lot, but all but one was taken away when her mom snapped. She was also pulled out of her ballet and gymnastics classes and basically had everything she loved taken away from her. She continued to be a normal child as much as she could with the help of her best friend.

Fast forward a few years to when she is in high school. She makes cheer, despite her mother's objections (her father supports her though). Her mom was ivy-leauge plans for her, which she does not want to do. Cheer is the one positive thing in her life and makes her a very very warm, open hearted, positive person.. despite her upbringing. She can be the most loyal friend, and can cheer anybody up... anybody but mother and a couple of snobby, envious cheerleaders on the squad.

There is a girl at her school who nobody really knows anything about. This girl is kind of weak, and is bullied by other students. She is called a dyke all the times, and generally has a rough time.

This is where our little main character's strength comes out. She decided to try to befriend this abused student in an attempt to end the abuse (and to make a new friend). Well this sets off a chain of events which leads to her thinking about her sexuality for the first time (she has never really thought about it before)..

and this is the crossroads. Now I can continue the story in two different ways. One was can be a self-discovery story based off her sexuality (or lack there of, I don't know anything about sexuality myself so it is tough for me to write about it) and relationship with her friend... in which the story can be read by most anybody.

Or I can take it down the original path I intended to take it. Basically her relationship leads to a big 'accident.' Her best friend gets seriously injured. Although she herself is ok, she is forced to go to the hospital... But she doesn't end up in the hospital. Rather she ends up being kidnapped and it turns out the whole accident which nearly killed her friend was a set up just to get her. She ends up being put back into diapers and reunited with her long lost bunnies. I don't think she would love the diapers as much as I do personally... She is going to go through most of it without really knowing what is going on to her.

But unlike an ABDL story, the diapers are not so much the main focus. Her strength and trust in her friends to help her out will be more important. Plus her desire to continue her love for cheer will open a path for her freedom.




I still think my original path would be more dramatic, but it seems a little less real. I think though getting her OUT of the situation is very important. a typical ABDL story would put the characters into diapers and all is happy after that. But I want her to find a way out because it will make her stronger. It will also open up a larger path that will finally heal her past wounds and give her an amazing future.

I wonder if i can finish this... should i go for it? even if i just write it for a few eyes

2 comments:

  1. i would like to see the relationship with her friend..a girl i meat in high school was called a dyke becase she did not have a boy friend, but i started to get to know her and we became good friends, she liked boys but she's incontanent and was afired of how boys would react and the rumors that would spred when they broke up. she has really helped me through my wetting issues and i will always lover her for that.

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  2. Tony
    that is awesome, thank you for sharing. Upon thinking it further, both characters are really cloudy in their sexuality. They are still trying to find it out.

    My first idea was that they would split up, but I think I need to keep them together. I will combine the two ideas :) maybe things will work out good for the both of them, even if they just end up as friends and not lovers (which is most likely what will happen, dont know yet)

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